Despite the fact that everything about anything is
available on the internet, I have a soft spot for libraries. As Matt Damon says
in his Good Will Hunting rant: “you
blew 150k on an education you could have gotten for $1.50 in late fees from the
library.” While I don’t think a college degree is completely useless, there is
something to be said for the resources that are available to knowledge-seekers.
My most recent foray into the library has been for copywriting books (stay
tuned for some Comet Tale advertisement mock-ups).
Typically, I get the call number for one book, head to
the general section and browse through the stacks. It’s exciting to look
through the sheer number of books written on any given subject, and to come
across quirky books that don’t make the college reading lists but that have
character. Without browsing the stacks, I never would have come across the gem
that is Robert L. Shurter, Ph.D’s Effective
Letters in Business.
First published in 1948 and reissued in 1954, Shurter’s
book comes with all the trappings of the post-war, Pleasantville era. Just to
give you an idea of its tone, here are some excerpts:
“Today, the indented form is practically obsolete because
it requires unnecessary stenographic time for margins and punctuation.” They
actually used typewriters. How archaic. (writers’ confession: I actually have
three typewriters myself)
“For more general purposes, his language is called
Gobbledygook (the sound a turkey gobbler makes when it struts) or Bafflegab (‘multiloquence
characterized by consummate interfusion of circumlocution’).”
“Can your stenographers take dictation at the rate of 120
words a minute? I can—and I am eager to prove that such speed does not lessen
my accuracy.”
The parallels between the business
letter and the business e-mail seem pretty apparent so even though I read the
book for a fun look into the past, some of the advice was still quite pertinent
today. I won’t highlight everything, instead I’ll just mention two of the
points that Shurter brings up early.
When writing a letter, Shurter
recommends taking the “you attitude.” Rather than focusing on your own needs, phrase
your letter so that it keeps the reader in mind. The principle of content
marketing takes this idea and runs with it. Rather than use a blog to shout
your offerings to the world, provide the world with information that is useful
to them. Frame your posts in an entertaining and informative fashion that
imparts benefit upon the reader.
In addition, Shurter warns
against the perils of jargon. There really is no point in writing if your
audience will need to have several encyclopedias and reference books by his or
her side to decipher your text. If your epistolary constructions employ copious
amounts of legalese, medicalese, or any other –ese, you might as well write in
Greek. To connect with your readership, write like your readership.
If you have some free time at
your disposal, I would definitely recommend looking through Shurter’s text. Sometimes
customs of ages past can be re-incorporated to much effect in the present.
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